Groundhog Fuck Day 02

Now you're getting somewhere

It's been a while, glad you carried on. You now have the makings of a good story, next question is - can you write good erotica?

Why so short?

I really wish there was more pages instead of one page per chapter... Not very fun having to wait for each chapter to come out.

It great to see your still working in this.

I really like how your playing out this concept in terms of pacing and setup. I encourage you to keep going. Now obviously the rate at which the content is coming out is slow (I should not judge since I have no idea what reallife pressures you have). I would strongly recommend not making every part of this story one page. It kinda annoying to have look for the link to the next part after only a page. Consider just making longer parts.

what's with the mom?

I agree it is a bit short.
What's with the mom? you keep using "Mrs. Dee" instead of mom, his mother etc.

like to see it keep going

like the idea, very little action so far. Def wat to see it keep going.

agreed would like to see it continue its ooen for many possiblitys

Keep it gojng

try harder

Would be better if you built up the story and then posted it at least somewhat complete.

Seriously, dude? I remember reading the first one last year and thinking, What the hell? Like, the apparent concept would be so cool... if you did one single thing with it. He didn't even get a positive response for the number request (nice fuckboy/asshole rib on stereotypical feminists, btw), and "Satan's" offer seemed so unrelated to Groundhog Day it wasn't even funny. It's now been more than 6mo, and you added absolutely zilch to the story. If it takes you six years to pull this together, fine, but don't post anything until then. Like, fuck man, I'm trying to get off here.

support

Love the way it's going, slow and tantalizing. Keep going.

Please continue

I'm so transfixed with this story please continue

A bit short

but looking forward to chapter 3

Hurry

I desperately seek more chapters