All Comments on 'Watching Pt. 01-02'

This was a fabulous spunk raiser.

The way it ended Chapter 2 and introduced Chapter 3 was such a twist, especially as she says that there is going to be a Captere 3 AND 4. I cant wait.

These stories have such a great build up.

Thanks Mary

Once again Mary you've produced something lovely and wicked. Five stars from here. Your characters combined with such wonderful mischief, settings, and lurid descriptions create something that drips with temptation, impropriety, and a sugary drizzle of kink. Simply love it. You've created an erotic pastry that the reader simply has to stop and gobble up. Well done. Keep going with more naughtiness from your pen please.

Dear Mary,

What a delightful tale spanning years to present entrapment that binds. I especially enjoy that both women avoid razors and are comfortable being natural.

You kicked the door open and have set the scene for naughty play ahead. I will find it difficult waiting to see how the future will enfold. Keep the naughtiness going.

I remember the original and its great you improved and developed it. 5 stars and I hope the sequel is out soon!

Mary , once again u titilate without being obscene, you have a distinct style that carries the reader along , unable to stop until the inevitable happens .....

I have missed u !

A wonderfully written story so erotic I will have to continue reading......

I have to agree with others on your skill at slowly unveiling the haughtier fetish bits--you reel your readers in a bit at a time --fascinating writing, and a fine sense of dialogue! A tip of my cap, and wanting to read more, Mary...

If he could only see her shoulders and head through the window how the hell does he see her bra and panties? The was enough for me. Read what you have written...it would help alot!