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Gratuitous sex unnecessary
Sex in this chapter did nothing to advance the story.
Can't win for losing with you guys...
If there's no sex, I get bitter complaints. If I put in sex, there's complaints. The sex in this story was put in because it just came to me to do so, and so I wrote it in. But you guys need to figure out what the heck you want, because you can't have it both ways, it's either-or with sex scenes...
You're Doing Great!
I am not sure about anon earlier or the comments on the other stories but I still love seeing when you have posted a story. To be honest I go on a search each time I get on LE to see if you have anything new. My only suggestion would be to write for you and ignore anyone asking you to change your writing. So far your judgment has given us a marvelous journey with a colorful story. Thank you very much for that!
Don't force it!!!!!!!
If you feel right in yourself, about what you write then that is the best of the best.
I love your writing as it flows, making you think and getting involved within the story.
Good luck keep up the good work.
I think having sex here was just fine
These shorter, interlude-like stories are the best place for the extended sex scenes. Not only do they not interfere with the more complex plots of the longer stories, it make more sense for them to happen when events don't require the characters to be so totally "on their game."
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