All Comments on 'No Room at the Cabana Ch. 01'

by TexRiffraff

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ReedRichardsReedRichardsalmost 8 years ago
I've been to Gunnison . . .

. . . and there are <i>plenty</i> of people there you are very glad to see naked!

ReedRichardsReedRichardsalmost 8 years ago
I saw what you did there

Bob and Ted and Carol and Alice? :)

WatcherRobWatcherRobalmost 8 years ago
Good story

I really like the writer using the four people's point of view. Very nicely written. I like that "sex", like humping and grunting, is a secondary point of view. I was surprised that more attention was not paid to the guys physical reactions to all the female stuff around them but that's OK. More!

DrGoodyDrGoodyalmost 8 years ago
Been there,done that

Nice story so far. We have been to Key West and been to this clothing optional bar. The description is true to life

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