All Comments on 'The Local'

The problem with this story...It's well written, with some funny parts, but we don't know who she is, so we don't know if this is a LW's story, or just an "Erotic Couplings" or a "Mature"...If I had to guess I would bet "Mature"...2*

For the read.

Lacking too much information to be considered a good read hopefully chapter two saves it as this weak on history and lead up and no true ending