The Local

Stupid

Present tense POV is never good, just awkward. Really badly written and ugly.

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She took a shower, got dressed, met dicey prospective lover. I hope the narrator wasn't as exhausted doing this as I was reading it. So much extraneous detail for so little done ? This is the way I would talk to someone if I had zero fear of repercussions from self absorption overload level.

The problem with this story...

The problem with this story...It's well written, with some funny parts, but we don't know who she is, so we don't know if this is a LW's story, or just an "Erotic Couplings" or a "Mature"...If I had to guess I would bet "Mature"...2*

This is the header that was left off ... sorry for the confusion...

This is a story told to me by my Lady Love... I did a stupid before we tied the knot and still lived about 300 miles apart that limited our getting together to about once a month... I told her to go out and find a fuck buddy while I was away. Well I got caught doing it on my end and lied about it. This was her reaction since she wasn't sure if it was the beginning of the end or?

Are you sure?

Uh, a fragrant colon? Really? Or did you mean cologne?

Thanks***

For the read.

Get a fucking editor! And why the fuck get married if you're so far apart?

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So you were not married, perhaps not even engaged. Given her age not sure of either prior marital status.
Pretty sure though I would not encourage my once a month booty call to seek out another...might end up loosing my once a month sure thing.
Merry widow would do her wonders jyou might suggest.
Have read part two---wondering what the number her encounters with BOB ended up being...more likely ongoing