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Wish Box Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/25/16

more more more

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by Miniwand05/25/16

You're mean

It's not very nice to make me wait so long for this chapter ;)
Your story is very good and the the way the wishes come true is original and funny. Please keep the chapters coming. I can't wait to read what he'll do next.

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by Anonymous05/25/16

More

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by Anonymous05/26/16

solid

solid.. waiting for nxt one

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by Anonymous05/28/16

depends on what you want

As a story the first paragraph is the only one that moved the story along. I did like how that was developed. The entire rest of the story is just a recap and rehash of past work.
If all you want is a wanking story it is a 3* at best.
Trey and his mom are past history, next chapter start it 6 months from this one. Trey could be busted for betting a cop, said and done, out of hands. Now move on to the big world and all the women, money and power out there

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by WanderingLost4205/31/16

Limits on the box?

So, the box orchestrates the most reasonable way for a wish to come true; but what if there is no reasonable way? What if he wished for body modifications? Would he just find a costume piece to approximate what he asked for?

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by zena9906/03/16

Love it

Great tale. I eagerly look forward to new chapters.

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by Reizo06/06/16

I really like it.

Good story, a bit short but then again, if it were easy then everyone would do it. I like the way this is going and would love to read more. Keep up the cool story.

Reizo

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by Anonymous06/06/16

Nice work.

These people are over thinking it. Great sex.

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by C_frommn12/08/16

What

About Money with Money comes Power and Women. Plus he can have a Buisness and go to college and meet some Nice Coeds. The getting Girl's and Women seem like a waste of the Box.

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