All Comments on 'Donna'

Five stars - would go higher if possible. The author gave us an innovative approach and more insight to people and how/why they act the way they do than you'd find in the fifty Literotica stories that preceded it - or will follow it.

I suspect that the story's relatively low rating is the result of its implicit requirement that the readers think a bit - more than a bit, really. Too bad. I hope we see more of this author's work if she is able to continue writing in this manner - specifically in opposition to the customs of Literotica (e.g., virgins are to be lead through the defloration process by the man giving instructions and cautionary statements) This woman had her own ideas of what would happen and could tell us how the fact matched, or did not match, the fantasy.

I was particularly intrigued by the author's introduction. She doubtless lost votes and readers both because it took some thinking to get into the narrator's POV both as to time and place.

Couldn't get past the first half page