All Comments on 'Fashion is Our Name Pt. 03'

Don't know how I missed them as they appeared,but as usual, a joy to read. Now, I will watch more closely for a new episode. Same top quality writing and engrossing characterization. Never a disappointment. Faved long ago. Five because Ten is not allowed.

I read all three chapters one sitting also. Loved it! Can't wait for chapter 4.

I really enjoy your stories and especially this group. Your ideas and new things that are though up are great. I get started reading and don't stop.

Thank you again.

Sudden change from third person to first person midway through the story. Confusing.

This is an amusing story that does not take itself too seriously. There are issues with switches between tenses and some edting in places would help but there is infectious fun and a suspension of belief throughout. I like the light touch in the writing - we can all read anatomy texts if we want heavy gynocological detail, and those texts have illustrations ...

Keep at it