The Chronicles of Mark and Jennifer Ch. 09

They are simply adorable

I just can't get enough of his cute they are in everything they do with and for each other, really a couple destined to be together. The girls reaction to the whole engagement was expected yet still made me laugh, his friends did need a fast-course etiquette lessons but in the end it payed off, but the a solute best was the Adonis wannabe in her class that got shot down in style. Her doubts regarding their relationship were both painfully realistic and fun but nothing Mark can't dissipate with simple heartfelt gesture, cooking skills to the rescue!

Although there were a few errors this time 'round like "of his mother's" instead of "or his mother's" and "catsup" instead of "ketchup", might help in the future.

In the end this was yet another splendid success and nothing but a full 5* would do!
Please more soon!

This is one of those stories that I really look forward to seeing a new chapter. Well written and realistic.

Chapter 10 . . .

. . . has been submitted.

Wonderful story

We know how this wonderful story turned out (the age of 63 with 44 years of marriage), and it is interesting and entertaining to see the simple steps along that path. They are a very loving and lovely couple, and I really enjoy reading about their discovery. Keep up the storytelling!

Ok you started this!

I thought chapter 8 was the end, and while I didn't want it to end, I could understand it. But now you started it back up with ch9 and got us hooked again! I really hope you continue this love story!

Great work! 5*

Chapter 10 has been approved . . .

. . . and will appear tomorrow. Chapter 11 has been started.

I had not planned on going beyond the end of Chapter 7, with the proposal.

A very believable story knowing the time period setting.

I've read all of the chapters multiple times. I love the way you've gone Back and developed the "Rest of the story" . The story's journey will turn out to be the Heart of Mark and Jennifer's life together. This is much better than 5 stars in my book.

Keep going, please

This is quite simply one of the best stories I've ever read here. The story, your style, and the quality are just excellent. When you carried on past chapter 7, I was made up, so please keep it going........

you keep making them

and the story special

thanks

I still love this story

This story I'm enjoying it every day.
I want to continue reading the following chapters.
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.