All Comments on 'The Nightingale Agency Pt. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I'll just, um, be over, yeah, over there having some private time. Yeah. Um, okay. Yeah.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Did it ever occur to you?

That he might simply stand up and beat her to death? Stupid story. Even for fiction it was both implausible and unbelievable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good end to this chapter

Really enjoying this whole story but am disappointed that Eve has started crossing the line. If she really wanted to break the contract she should have had the spine to do it herself.

Really liking the progression of Eve and Octavius as a couple.

DoctorWolframDoctorWolframalmost 8 years ago
More!

More chapters please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More Please!

Really enjoying this story. Can hardly wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Nice

Am enjoying watching Eve and her journey and hope that there r more chapters coming soon,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

well written , delightful , intruiging story

seems a shame that the Fuckwits & Trolls Vitriolic Feedback

ended this story before it had really even begun.

Admiralbird348Admiralbird348over 5 years ago
Not bad....

Actually kinda hot😉

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