The Local Ch. 02

Revenge fuck...

Revenge fuck...Will she feel better after this revenge fuck? Will she look herself in a mirror without regrets? To lower herself to the level of her cheating man (still now, we don't know what he is to her - husband, lover, boyfriend - just that they live apart and that she is lucky if she sees him once a month) is the right move? Now they are equals in cheating, and that will make their ruined relationship work? 1*

Forget Brian She doesn't love or respect him

Just change the category and let her become a whore somewhere else... She does not even respect herself... you can write, but your plot lines need a lot of work, characters need to be developed over time and your reader needs to be able to identify with at least one. Then a good reader establishes an emotional connection with your story.

Hmmm

Do we yet what Brian did to warrant over the top revenge or did i miss it?

Really bad

Sounds like something swingerjoe would write. Are you posting under pen names, joe?

5

Annony is a talking pile of pigshit! GAVE IT A 5 TO OFFSET HIS SAD BUT USUAL 1 VOTE ON EVERY STORY ON HERE.

OK, so she's getting revenge, because Brian has been cheating on her...

...well good for her. What's good for the goose is good for the gander. If Brian "has needs" she can't meet while away, and takes it on himself to "satisfy those needs", no discussion, no direct communication of any kind, well, then he needs to experience being on the receiving end of that bad news, too.
It sounds to me like may she'll discover she's found a better substitute and will kick Brian to the curb.
Well, no one can say he didn't have that coming.

Thanks***

For the read.

All of you writers need to get with admin and ban vastismith just like bonnie bitch, while 'it' is still around you'll get 1 bombed just because of the poor excuse for an 'it'.