All Comments on 'His Birthday Plaything Pt. 02'

by JesterBoheme

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CallMeBigMike69CallMeBigMike69over 7 years ago
Good story I want more

You have a couple of good chapters written but the way it ended I assume there is more still to cum. It would have been nice if she could have seen J and her boyfriend fucking at the end rather then just him watching.

You are doing very good with your writing so keep going and we will keep reading.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Sadly yet another unfinished series

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