All Comments on 'Tempted and Teased in Texas Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Soooo hot. Write more soon!

Dark_StormDark_Stormalmost 8 years ago
Continuity error

You ended Ch. 03 with "...she squeezed my cock through my pants. 'Now I guess you should go take care of this. See you soon.'" So, Jack didn't jack-off while kissing Sophia's ass that first time, as you said he did in this chapter.

I'm enjoying this story very much, but the short chapters are like drinking a beer using an eye-dropper. It would be nice to chug a bit down for a change.

writemarksmithwritemarksmithalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks.

I think he had imagined doing that so many times he thought he really did.

Senzuri_SenseiSenzuri_Senseialmost 8 years ago
my favorite series of yours

Love this series most of all for some reason. I'm glad you're continuing it. Keep it up!

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 8 years ago
UMMMMM....such sensual ass worship at such a HOT "altar."

My tongue is hard thinking about being in Jack's place!!!!

Randy56rRandy56ralmost 8 years ago
Sofiaaaaa!

One thought ...MORE of this please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Waiting

Avidly waiting for the nest chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Waiting!!

More please!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Please write another chapter! PLEASE

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More

Part 5?

Sharko01Sharko01over 5 years ago
More please

I sure would like you to continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
NOT GO FAR ENOUGH

If you like basking in the aroma of Thanksgiving dinner cooking even though you never get to eat it, you would like this story. Heavens! He does not even get a hand job, let alone..... Why so tentative? This is Literotica, not Highlights for Children.

He's acting like an inexperienced neophyte. He's a man, rich from working years in a high-level job and experienced with years of sex with his wife. Why so shy? If not taking charge, he should at least be holding his own with the temptresses. Maybe this reveals something of why he was not enough for his wife -- was he the pussy, instead of her?

I wanted to find out what happened with his 2 lawyers. Another tantalizing, without getting anywhere.

2 stars.

Paul in Oklahoma

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Anymore

Liked it so far but would like to see what happens next

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