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The Roommate

byValoryG©
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by Luvbttmsnsissies06/16/16

Nice beginning

Nice beginning...am curious as to where you will take it - and how you will take it there.

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by Anonymous06/16/16

i do believe it does not end here

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by pampywampy06/16/16

i do hope there is more ,xx cant wait

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You left it hanging ...

I would have suggested holding off on publishing until a lot more had transpired to move the plot forward, such as them having sex.

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by Anonymous06/17/16

Nice story

I hope you write more chapters to this story. I can picture how it might progress and look forward to see if I am write. I love that you are staring slow and make me want more.

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by DianeRedfern06/17/16

Definitely left me lusting for more, you tease!

Ok, you've got me building so much wetness with real interesting characters with intriguing back grounds and visual imagery and then, THATS IT!?!!! N

There had Better be a part 2 and soon!

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by Leeannecd06/18/16

Great story.

Great story. More please.

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by Anonymous06/18/16

Great story

Roomy's panties in hand, Anticipating chapter 2

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