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Thanks***
For the read.
Cute
I have agree, a year is a long time. I assume he wasn't having sex with her during that time.
Still a cute story.
I GUESS HER CUCKS WERENT ALL IN A ROW
while his duckies were perfectly aligned, TK U MLJ LV NV
Hmmm...
Why did he wait a year? Oh well. He's now free of a cheating cunt wife. He can make up the sex with his new love.
Five Stars
Why did he wait?
Why did he wait? Possibly so he would have enough video to use as blackmail so she wouldn't put up a fight. I can understand him not wanting to kill the mother of his children, because that would hurt them. Of course if there were no children to consider I think killing the cheating slut would have been better. Just saying.
* * * *
After the divorce is final, he should send the video link to EVERYONE.
So all it takes is a divorce?
Then it's a good story? It was a plot my 15 year old son could have written. Just nothing.
A good story and to the point...
A good story and to the point...Just a question: Why did she had to work in the bar? For a year she was a whore...why not take the chance to keep going being one and earning her money with it? 3*
???
A video camera in a pendant, how will that take worth while video of her???
wow
a person with morals this story was great, to the person with the 15 year old son hopefully he will piss on you and your sicko mind when he gets the fuck away from you.
Doesn't make sense
If the pendant is around her neck, shooting outwards, she actually won't be in any of the shots. Just her partner. No one would know it was her.
It really is completely unbelievable on several points...
First, pendent would only do a POV of the Johns. Which if released - at least one of them will deal with hubby. Second, but really more serious is the illegal nature of releasing the videos. Unless you have a signed models consent from BOTH parties, this is illegal in every state and will get your a$$ sued off and in jail. Not to mention that turning a consensual encounter into a public porn video is illegal in many states in general and without proper documentation in most - meaning additional jail time on that alone. There is also civil grounds based on invasion of privacy, the list goes on and on. Nice FANTASY but down side would be not be worth the risk. Believe me, kids would side with mom due to public embarrassment. (I was injured party but when I outed her, daughter and son said I was needlessly cruel to mom, have not heard from them or seen grandchildren in 12 years, ex is there daily I hear.) Dad would be broke and in jail for a long stint IF he were not already beaten to death.
non erotic
Non Erotic stories should be posted in NON EROTIC.
Retro LW story
Well this was like taking a trip down LW memory lane.
If you're like myself and, on average , only about one out of every 15 to 20 new postings in this category is in your enjoyment range , then you certainly spend a lot of time in the archives. Thank God that we have them !
This story could have been from circa '05 to '06ish , when this category changed from the Hotwife/ Voyeur category to what it is today. ( I am certainly thankful of that change , or else I wouldn't be a loyal Literotica visitor now.
People are constantly bemoaning the same old plot lines now , just carry your happy little Ass back to the beginning of Literotica in this category. Yes it was a virtual Cornucopia of diverse story lines, NOT ! 95% plus stories of that era were cookiecutters of the same old Hotwife/swinger/Voyeur storylines. Swingerjoe , luedon , lex1 and the rest of the gang would have been in heaven ! ( note I didn't mention FLC , that twerp would have been bitching and throwing a hissy fit no matter what!)
So thank you RLmann , for making me nostalgic this morning.
4*'s
this is erotic as hell, that woman deserved even less
after all dead wives tell no lies
To those commenters with long memories....
SwingerJoe thinks it has been long enough that people have forgotten about his OTHER pen name here for Literotica. This is the name he uses when he purposefully writes a sub par story, and hopes that based on "subject matter" alone, the story will still score high marks, despite being OBVIOUSLY flawed. The flaws, like in this one with the 'super-spy" pendant camera, are a ploy to see if the same commenters who always pan stories for their lack of realism IGNORE it when the subject concerns a stupid wife getting burned in an inevitable divorce. This story has one purpose ONLY. To prove that LW commenters are misogynist. That way, he and his good buddy FLC can sit back and laugh at all the dopey idiots that they managed to fool, and feel some measure of justification when they rant and rave in the comments of other stories written by REAL authors that contribute their honest best efforts at entertaining the LW masses.
What bothers me the most is the hypocracy, and the insult to our collective intelligence.
Even SwingerJoe's alias here is meant to be a slap in the face as he parodies what he views as the typical LW reader. RLMann......."Real Man". (as in He-Man Women Hater's Club)
I can hear his contemptuous snort of derision as he mockingly scribbles out another POS one pager in less than 10 minutes.
"here's another one for the 'real men' of LW..." *SNORT*
"may be it will actually score over 4 stars?!?!"
If any story deserves a one bombing, than it is this one, or any other by RLMann.
Because if you see it here, it was meant to be a social experiment only, where the butt of the joke is the reader, and most of us aren't even in on it.
Sorry SwingerJoe, had to call you out here, but this kind of shit really bothers me.
If I find that you have deleted this comment to protect your "secret", then I will know how much of a scared little pussy boy you really are. I mean reading comments from you over the last few years, we already KNOW, but these actions will only reinforce that knowledge.
Just own up to it. You've been caught. And NOW you'll need a different alias.
It's not so bad, may be your next pen name will be even MORE clever!
See ya, dude..............
To Anony
Well, shit. You couldn't have let a little more time pass before your "big reveal?" Way to take all the fun out of it. Remind me not to invite you to my next party.
Yep, I wrote this story in maybe 20 minutes. I typed it out on my cellphone with my thumbs while watching a ballgame. I couldn't have given it less of an effort, really. I didn't proofread it, and didn't even have a plot in mind when I started typing. I just followed the standard BTB paint by numbers formula: the brain-dead wife, the stoic and hard-working husband, the cheating for no reason, the confrontation, the high-tech spying equipment, the turnabout, the divorce, and finally the happily-ever-after ending.
I'm happy to see that some readers were critical. Happier to see others proving my point about how easy it is to write for the BTB crowd. And the 4-star rating for this garbage story proves my point about the LW ratings system.
I really wish this little experiment could have continued a little longer. It was fun while it lasted.
An adequate flash story, but an opportunty missed.
This plot could have been developed into a more interesting and compelling story. Lots of opportunities to explore her descent into whoredom, his discovery and coping, how it went on for a year without either spouse drastically changing their attitude and relationship toward each other, and why she waited a year before trying to get him to join her or give her permission. Surely he did not continue to fuck her bare back after she became a slut at a bar.
Anyway, glad he dumped her, but it still makes no sense why she destroyed her marriage, her reputation, and her future, just for some strange cock.
Meh , I'll stick with my comment
Swingerjoe , congratulations on your big experiment. Hey at least now I can say that I have actually read and (wait for it..........) SCORED one of your LW stories !!!! Lol Chuckle !
Everything I said in my comments , I will stick too. You actually did show a decent representation of the LW amphibian first crawling out of the primordial ooze that this category started out as , then shedding it's gills , becoming a much more complex creature.
You actually could become a decent LW writer if you took this storyline and polished it up a little . Maybe you should consider it.
Hell, the late Senator Byrd ( D-WV) went from being a Grand Wizard of the KKK , to becoming one of the most liberal Senators of his era , so stranger things have happened. ( somehow , I bet he was a favorite of yours)
Come on over from the Darkside , Anakin Skywalker ! LoL .
@ Crkcppr
Thanks, man. I appreciate your honesty. I have actually written a BTB tale (Getting Even), and may venture into that realm again someday. Frankly, I just find stories of divorce and revenge to be boring, so there isn't a lot of motivation for me to venture down that road. I'd much rather stick to happier tales of people having hot, fun sex. I thought that's what Literotica was supposed to be all about!
By the way, I'd argue that Sen. Byrd never actually changed his stripes. He simply adopted a new form of discrimination and oppression. (Not to get too political.) I always laugh when people here assume things about me without knowing anything about me. I've been called both a bleeding-heart liberal and radical right-winger on this site. I suppose I should take that as a compliment.
@swingerjoe
Brilliant experiment. I was just about to comment on the overly simple and boring story getting good votings because of the so much desired BTB ending. Then I read your comment. Perfect.
Funny
I gave it 3*. That was before I knew who wrote it. You did a good job of writing it to fit your thoughts on who would be reading it. At least you didn't make him a drunk redneck. It's funny living in Kentucky I know a lot of redecks, I've yet to read a single story on here that comes close being real.
This makes no sense
The pendant camera would show the guys who fucked her, maybe. No way it shows her. She would have to be in the dull normal intelligence range, or lower not to know that. 2* for correct spelling and grammar.
Better luck next time.
ANON '...no sense'
So she never humps her pick-ups (or just walks around) in front of a mirror? Most video cams also have audio inputs! Perhaps a bit of a stretch when we look at the price of micro spy tech, but it IS fiction, and this (otherwise trite) tale IS plausible.
3*
Just for a moment
I thought I was reading one of my stories, so it must be brilliant ?????????????????
Short and sweet
The video camera would only show the guy fucking her. Why wait a year to serve her. If he downloaded the videos how was he able to capture her on them when the pendent is facing away.
Hmmm
Out of the 24 stories listed in the "new stories" section of Loving Wives, only three others are rated higher than this one. It's been favorited five times, and is among the highest-rated LW stories this week.
Just sayin'.
Ouch
That must have hurt writing a story like this, eh, swingerjoe. Did you use both thumbs, or was one sufficient? Nothing like a good burn the bitch story is there, even if it was laughable? I can see now why you allowed scoring on this one. Not disappointed where you? lol. Man the devious methods one uses to try to stay ahead in the games readers play in this category called "loving wives".
As to the story, written just as intended, by the numbers. click, click, click it all falls in place. Right? 3* for the entertainment, including the feedback of course. (signed ML)
Oh, can't forget bonnietaylor2, sorry
No feedback is complete without our brilliant linguist bonnietaylor2. Your two lines just made my day. What did you think of this little btb tale? Did you like it, or hate it? I have to disregard your score since it's always the same. Maybe next time you could write a sentence or two about the actual story itself. By the way what's a "pugs". Did you mean "pigs"? If your going to insult some one please at least make sure the spelling is correct. Have a wonderful day, skipping from story to story, not to many today and leaving your brilliant deductions and theories of the stories in loving wives.
(signed ML)
What could you see on a pendant style VC?
Nice idea but it falls out zone of believability. It is sort of an invisible man story.
One question would be, Why does she want to officialize her behaviour?
I use the penname
Rehnquist most of the time. (I wish)
Point Of View
As others have said, the camera would only show the guys, people would have to take his word that SHE was wearing it when those videos were shot. He could have hired a prostitute to wear it while she had sex.
I think...
...some of you are missing the point that it's not supposed to make sense.
;-)
Pointing out the obvious
Before you break your arm patting yourself on the back about how clever you are, joe, think about this. We needed you to point out the obvious? So, there are a bunch of angry men on this site that read loving wives. No one knew? They have been betrayed by some slut or other who destroyed their lives. They will give any piece of garbage story at least a four, so long as a bitch is burnt. Everyone knows this. No one needed you to point it out.
On the other hand, there are a bunch of angry “enlightened” people on here that will give any piece of garbage story at least a four, as long as there is a cock cage in it. You are the first lieutenant of that brigade. You’re not the general; you’re not that good.
Everyone knows this, too. No one needs a smart ass to point it out. Then there are the good writers and commentators. They enjoy a good story, regardless of the morality of the characters. It was a good story and the bitch is burnt. Great, write more. It was a good story and they worked it out and got back together. Great, write more. The wife was a total slut, the husband loved it and it was as hot as hell. Great, write more.
Assclowns, such as yourself, from the second category never saw a story where cheating, lying and betrayal have consequences that are bad for the cheater that they didn’t hate and make all sorts of derogatory statements about.
Neanderthals from the first category, never saw a story where the bitch didn’t wind up in a Mexican whorehouse, dying from AIDS, that they didn’t hate.
You pretend to be soooo superior to the first group, when in actuality, you’re exactly the same. None of you are interested in a good story, just your own little petty agenda. The sad fact is, this is better than the story you usually write. This was mildly entertaining, on it’s own merits, about a three star story. Your usual garbage is agenda driven and nauseating, two star, or less, crap.
Why not just take the good stories and enjoy them without all this stupid shit you’re constantly trying to pull? Write your wife sharing story, make it hot and I’ll like it. Write your usual “make the world safe for cheaters” shit and and we’ll all just laugh at you and move on. What an ass!
Funny
The experiment is still working as nobody can be bothered to read the comments. I have a feeling that 15 more guys will remark that the camera won´t capture the wife. But that it still was a good story. Hilarious.
Re. pointing out the obvious
Gee, Anony, you were pretty much wrong about everything you just wrote! How any one person can be so wrong about so many things is impressive.
If "everyone knows" that all LW ratings are based only on whether the bitch ends up humiliated, dead, or divorced in the end, then please explain why so many people deny this obvious truth. Whenever I point out the fact that ratings in this category are pointless and irrelevant, I get push-back from those who insist otherwise. I just wrote a shit story that is among the highest-rated of the week. If "everyone knows" that, then this shouldn't come as a surprise to anyone, right?
One more point: it's beyond tedious to see anonies like yourself try to put words in my mouth and tell me what I think and what I like. If you can find an example of where I've claimed to be "superior", "enlightened", or "evolved", please do me a favor and point it out. Likewise, if you can find a story where I've praised "cock cages" or "cum-slurping men" or any of the other nonsense that I supposedly enjoy, please show me. Don't project onto me everything that you hate about "them cucks." It makes you look like an idiot.
My only "agenda" here is to point out the BTB crowd's agenda. The reason it takes so little to please you, and the reason why you rate these shitty stories so high, is obvious: you want to force all the non-BTB stories out of this category. This little "war" is now several years in the making. Have you made any progress?
My "agenda" is promoting the stories and authors that offer a unique, interesting, erotic, compelling, and/or thought-provoking take on the "Loving Wives" genre. I don't care if it's BTB, "cuck", or anywhere in between. Just make it interesting. Stop submitting the same goddamn story over and over again. Add a little unexpected twist. Give your characters some depth and realism. Is that too much to ask?
almost refreshing
to have the sting taken out of the infamous 4 words. Sometimes it really is nice to be able to talk to the person you love.
Reminds me of Britease!
That isn't a bad thing! Good, dry, savvy humor in this tale. The GNO theme has been done to death, but whatever. The spy tech camera in the necklace was a pretty novel idea, though. Just a good BTB flash tale without violence, just the threat of making Wifey's slutty nature public to her friends and family. Keep writing, RL. This was fun! :)
5 Stars
Wait for it... he should be here soon... you know who I mean... the guy who screams MISOGYNY!!!! at the drop of a hat... will also probably tell the author to never post in "his" category ever again... LOL
I liked
Just like your other story. 4*
LMAO
IronDragon's comment just made my day!
Oh...it was all worthwhile.
oh bloody hell!!
swingerjoe you bloody fool!!! id was talking about foreskinblister you twit!!!! yea where is that nonce????
@ Anon
I know. I'm laughing at the rest of his comment. He really should have read the comments before he added his own! LOL.
Hey, it's all in good fun. And it's Friday. Great way to end the week!
Yeah, well
I'm pretty sure there's a smile on most people's faces. They're smiling at you. You were always a little shit, but you showed your true colors, here.
You've become the court jester of Literotica. The fool. You think you're cute, but everyone else thinks you're just a laughable piece of shit.
Oh, I also heard that you're ugly and your mother dresses you funny. That should get down to your level. What are you, some kind of third grade bully?
No explanatory comment from RLmann?
In his other story he felt the need to explain how it came to be listed as a Non Erotic story rather than Loving Wives.
I await the explanation why this one was in Loving Wives rather than How To.
Lue
Yea, where is that dunce.
We miss his eloquent rhetoric of why btb stories suck big time and of course the anons who prefer them.Can't miss talking about the anons, you'll be struck dead if you can't at least insult them in some way or the other. Eh?
Question swingerjoe, how goes your battle maintaining the status quo. Explain to us again the real meaning of loving wives? For heavens sake have them drop the word "& more" of the description. They really fuck up this category. Don't they?
How many fucking times have you idiots been told this category is only for the swingesr, the whores, excuse me, I mean hot wives, the humiliated little dick husbands that want to share and watch their wives being fucked by the bulls, or the wives that men like to share from neighbor to neighbor. Hell if we can't take care of that pussy, we'll just farm out that job to our friends and neighbors. Right? We won't hold them to their wedding vows, or to any society standards, we just like to rut and fuck anybody we can get a hold off. Doesn't matter who we hurt and what the fallback will be. Who gives a fuck, as long as we can get our rocks off in some strange pussy. Right swingerjoe. And you have a problem with the burn the bitch guys? Really?
Criticisms of BTB are valid.
When I first wrote stories in other categories here, I and other budding writers were warned away from the "wolves" of LW, as it was openly undertood that the readership here is openly hostile to LW stories that didnt fit their expectations, be they BTB, RAAC or whatever. To an extreme. That said there are stories worth reading here, and even BTB are a pleasure, though its disappointing to see its nearly always the wives, resulting in boring repititious stories. As with Fetish, you wont catch me reading cuck. They're just gross. And yet I see at least one commenter in here that borders on Taliban psychosis.
That said, all interptretations of "loving wives" are valid. Limiting it is simply putting yourself in a boring, angry little box. Alot of you simply need to pull the stick out, unclench and enjoy the stories you like withou turning every single one into a shitfest.
Yes. I'm anonymous. You dont know me. Call me whatever the fuck you want.
For those concerned about the Loving Wives category
Perhaps we need a Hate-filled Husbands section?
Lue
I call bullshit!
Loving Wives - Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more.
I guess your story falls under the "more" category, as there isn't any fun, swinging or sharing going on here. If you're miserable, go somewhere else! This isn't about you, it's about us men who LOVE their wives fucking other people. Get a fucking life man!
Finally a non-RACC submission.
Fucking cunt deserved a hell of a lot more damage then a divorce.
good for a laugh, thanks
Until the reality of the camera not being able to work raised its ugly head.
But it had me laughing none the less.
Thanks, I needed that.
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