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One Afternoon in December

byAlwaysHungry©
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by Anonymous

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by GuiltyPleasure05/27/16

Undeniably erotic...

......and lovely. Like a slow burn, it starts dryly then burns white hot with a final clincher in the last line.

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by Angeline05/28/16

Excellent

Could not agree more with GP's assessment. I might cap Sun, but maybe that's just my preference showing. 😃

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by ishtat05/30/16

Almost tastable

This is a crackling, sizzling poem.

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