All Comments on 'The Uninvited'

I want to read more. More please. Thank you.

on the magical dick aspects...

Please add more parts

Hot! I love your style and want more

Being forced to cum is hot

It was good but I wanted to hear more of a description of Jo. Keep writing.

Soo hot please write more of this soon

Please the next chapter...story is super good.

Damn woman you are really tapping into that like dark part of my heart.

This was a fantastic read! I know it has been a while since you wrote this, but this story totally needs another chapter or two! Hot, hot, hot!!!

Omg this was so good are you ever going to write more with this story??? PLEASE DO!!!!!

More, please!

Your writing is spectacular and we all need more !!

Hmm, very good. But I hate cliff hangers, please continue. 4 Stars.

It's been quite a while since you have posted this story but I hope you continue. This was a great story one of the best I've read in this category. Please please finish. You are great at what you do!!

If some junior detective-college rat could recognize his corny romance novel name (Nathaniel Steel? Really?) and connect it to a spree of killings, even the most Barney Fife, incompetent police department could have located his sloppy criminal ass by now. I realize there is no rule that says erotic stories should have a well crafted plot, but my god, try to rise above the level of poor comic book writing.

The previous commenter needs to chill the fuck out. This is literotica, not a fucking ceremony for the nobel prize in literature lmao. I liked it a lot, and I hope you keep writing!

I absolutely love this story. I need more! Please please please write more like this😍 pretty please. This is just so damn hot!

Thanks for the hot read!

Please write another chapter! I know it’s been a long time but like many others I’m hooked. So many dark and juicy places you can take this story!