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Outsourcing your wife's anniversary boink because life is too demanding and your energy is required elsewhere
Damm you NAFTA ! Lol..
You have to admit that Slamdawgg
had a really funny comment!
Like Your Style
Nice present for the wife...like the presentation.
I agree with @Harddaysknight...
I agree with @Harddaysknight...@LordSlamdawgg comment was funny and a lot better than this sad story...The wife says to him: "Go sit babe, you're not needed.", then she plays with the lover all week and suddenly cut off all contact with him? Is this husband absolutely sure of that? 2* just because it turned possible that comment from @LordSlamdawgg ...
impo-61
I have to ask why you come here everyday,read these stories and then complain about the stories in detail,,WHY?
Don't feed the trolls
So there are little insecure twats in every comment section. They come on attacking he/she whom wrote the story because why? Because they are so insecure in their meaningless existence that they feel they need to pass judgement on superior people in order to feel like they have worth.
Don't engage them. Instead, imagine the humor us image of a zit-faced, neck-bearded, greasy fella in his mother's basement angrily choosing to read a story for no reason other than to complain. Their Cheetoh stained fingers mucking up the keyboard as they attack more talented people with a zealous frenzy outmatched only by the length of time since they last actually had sex, they wither away into nothingness leaving only a greasy stain on the chair.
Every time
I do what the author suggests ... I see another image of most
wannabee authors on this venue... Sorry to the small group of good writers out there... to them, keep writing
re: Don't feed the trolls
Right, you slam people daring to post an opinion that differs from yours, without saying anything about the story, and THEY'RE the ones who are insecure troll? Really?
In what fucking reality, pal?
Ya want to see the personification of insecure? Look in a mirror.
Amazing!!!!!
Didn't anyone ever tell you..to grow the muscles for show, you give up mobility and stamina. Goes to show, what happens to muscle bound jocks. Need to make a choice buddy. A loving wife with lots of sex or lots of muscles and no sex....
Pretty good presentation, not my favorite topic, kind of a rerun of over a dozen stories...
....with this same storyline. Oh, you had the alpha couple weightlifter in show prep sex-blues angle, but your solution was as unimaginative as the setting.
We'd need considerably more characterization to get to know each of these three people and relate to any of them. As it is, there isn't enough of them in there anywhere to care.
Maybe I'm sheltered and naive, but I've never met anyone that has or would do something like this. What was his intent? Did he think about ramifications after the fact? There's always consequences to every action. Your abrupt ending doesn't address her new "taste" for strange. Now that you've given her leave to fuck other men, what's to say she won't do it again when she gets "hungry" for more, what about when you have your next dispute? When things get a little slow or boring. And if true to type, she wouldn't necessarily tell you about hooking up with stud-muffin from the gym. Remember she goes there often, too. Maybe one of three trips, she detours to the stud muffin's place for some variety.
My point, it's that you didn't give us enough about the characters to make your claims believable.
More work on those items might have made it a better story, although that would still be just an improvement on an already often repeated storyline. Like I said....kind of another rerun....
Pretty funny. A muscle man giving his wife to another man.
Guess most of his muscle was between his ears.
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