My kind of humiliation. A white cuckold to the
black man, keep writing!!
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Anonymous04/01/04
Why
How could someone write shit like this nobody would marry someone like this
by
Anonymous04/01/04
Great
Great fantasy for sure, although I'd be scared to live it out.
I do know the two negative comments came from Aholes, why'd they read the whole story if they didn't like it so they must be lying....
by
Anonymous04/01/04
What is that stench? Oh. it's your "story"
Why do I open stories from this category and then give a negative rating. According to the morons, it is because I hate the genre. (Of course, these are also the cretins who can't read the "Love it? Hate it?" part and think that only over the top gushing comments are permitted.) WRONG! I have no problems with the genre. In the right hands (e.g., Drifter and J. Bosewell), it's very good. In the hands of this moron, it's shit.
This isn't writing, and it is not a variation on a theme. Almost sentence by sentence, it is EXACTLY the same story that can be found anywhere. What I hate is a lack of effort and intelligence.
by
Anonymous04/01/04
racist stories
Just another racist story with all the usual trite bs that comes with this type of fiction. And yes it is just as racist to say a black man is better than a white man as it is to say the opposite. Any time you judge a person by their race, that is being racist. While there may be those who enjoy this type of work, I think most would rather have something with alittle more reality to it.
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Anonymous04/02/04
well done
Great stuff. My girlfriend and I jerk off to a similar fantasy on the phone when she's travelling. We are in the process of setting a black mini-gangbang for her, but LOL - I'll just be watching!
by
Anonymous04/02/04
Gee, Bob, you've done it again!
It's truly amazing that each installment of this story can be increasingly bad! Bob, it's almost as if you are intending to submit the worst piece of trash ever written. Are you stinking the joint out on purpose, Bob?
It's nice that my stories are generating such interest, both negative and positive. Judging by the voting and the private feedback I am receiving, I am pleased that by far, more people seem to be enjoying my stories than those that don't.
For those that don't enjoy them, well, not much I can do. You already know my writing style, so you may want to skip future stories?
For those that are commenting on the racism aspect, or the marriage aspect or whatever: remember, this story, along with most other erotica, is simply a fantasy. Something that gives me, the writer, the enjoyment of writing, and hopefully something that gives you, the reader, the enjoyment of reading. None of this has happened, nor will it happen. It is fantasy. The title of the story seems clear enough, so stop feeling offended or insulted with a few words on your screen. :)
Enjoy. Chapter 5 is being worked on, and should hopefully appear by next week.
Thanks again to all my readers, fans, and yes, even detractors.
by
Anonymous04/02/04
It Made Me Hard !!!!
I Love your story. My wife forced me to wear panties and suck a black mans cock and then he fucked my wife. I loved it and I hope she does it again. Keep up the good work.
by
Anonymous04/03/04
Great stuff
Keep up the good work insatiable. Your detractors just don't get it. This is fantasy. Of course it's not realistic, and who gives a shit whether it's racist or not. Everyone is a little racist no matter how well they hide it. And the fact that the protagonist is cuckolded to a black man just makes the tale that much jucier.
Anyway, it makes me and my wife horney to read your stories. Please keep them coming.
BTW: I'm noticing a definite improvement in the writing style with each chapter. ;^)
by
Anonymous04/17/04
Loved it
Love the contrast of the black cock and white pussy. Keep it up.
by
Anonymous05/31/04
a cuckolds tale 1 to 4
not bad bob, not bad at all...the best story Ive read so far and Ive read a fair few keep the story going please
English
bandwidth
This is a worthless waste of bandwidth.
Gary
GREAT!
My kind of humiliation. A white cuckold to the
black man, keep writing!!
Why
How could someone write shit like this nobody would marry someone like this
Great
Great fantasy for sure, although I'd be scared to live it out.
I do know the two negative comments came from Aholes, why'd they read the whole story if they didn't like it so they must be lying....
What is that stench? Oh. it's your "story"
Why do I open stories from this category and then give a negative rating. According to the morons, it is because I hate the genre. (Of course, these are also the cretins who can't read the "Love it? Hate it?" part and think that only over the top gushing comments are permitted.) WRONG! I have no problems with the genre. In the right hands (e.g., Drifter and J. Bosewell), it's very good. In the hands of this moron, it's shit.
This isn't writing, and it is not a variation on a theme. Almost sentence by sentence, it is EXACTLY the same story that can be found anywhere. What I hate is a lack of effort and intelligence.
racist stories
Just another racist story with all the usual trite bs that comes with this type of fiction. And yes it is just as racist to say a black man is better than a white man as it is to say the opposite. Any time you judge a person by their race, that is being racist. While there may be those who enjoy this type of work, I think most would rather have something with alittle more reality to it.
well done
Great stuff. My girlfriend and I jerk off to a similar fantasy on the phone when she's travelling. We are in the process of setting a black mini-gangbang for her, but LOL - I'll just be watching!
Gee, Bob, you've done it again!
It's truly amazing that each installment of this story can be increasingly bad! Bob, it's almost as if you are intending to submit the worst piece of trash ever written. Are you stinking the joint out on purpose, Bob?
what a waste
how stupid cant it get
I actually like comments
It's nice that my stories are generating such interest, both negative and positive. Judging by the voting and the private feedback I am receiving, I am pleased that by far, more people seem to be enjoying my stories than those that don't.
For those that don't enjoy them, well, not much I can do. You already know my writing style, so you may want to skip future stories?
For those that are commenting on the racism aspect, or the marriage aspect or whatever: remember, this story, along with most other erotica, is simply a fantasy. Something that gives me, the writer, the enjoyment of writing, and hopefully something that gives you, the reader, the enjoyment of reading. None of this has happened, nor will it happen. It is fantasy. The title of the story seems clear enough, so stop feeling offended or insulted with a few words on your screen. :)
Enjoy. Chapter 5 is being worked on, and should hopefully appear by next week.
Thanks again to all my readers, fans, and yes, even detractors.
It Made Me Hard !!!!
I Love your story. My wife forced me to wear panties and suck a black mans cock and then he fucked my wife. I loved it and I hope she does it again. Keep up the good work.
Great stuff
Keep up the good work insatiable. Your detractors just don't get it. This is fantasy. Of course it's not realistic, and who gives a shit whether it's racist or not. Everyone is a little racist no matter how well they hide it. And the fact that the protagonist is cuckolded to a black man just makes the tale that much jucier.
Anyway, it makes me and my wife horney to read your stories. Please keep them coming.
BTW: I'm noticing a definite improvement in the writing style with each chapter. ;^)
Loved it
Love the contrast of the black cock and white pussy. Keep it up.
a cuckolds tale 1 to 4
not bad bob, not bad at all...the best story Ive read so far and Ive read a fair few keep the story going please
Soon-to-be wife
Sounds far more like soon-to-be-slutwife.
He had best fold his tent and steal away into the night.
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