by Randymann64
very good story... but what's with the hooker talk? it would have been ebtter without that.
Very nice! Not only was it hot, immediate, and realistic, but you could actually feel the sense of discovery in his young mind. Good job!
That is so realistic... I love how innocent and untutored they are. I especially liked her surprise.
Liked the story but didn't get the hooker stuff that kept popping in. He had been with hookers but didn't know about vaginas having holes? What was he doing with the hookers then? Probably should just take that stuff out
Reminds me of my first hand job by the girl next door. She was hot!