All Comments on 'Yesterday's Valentine'

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
Brilliant!

now it reveals them

bright eye-catcher, perpetual movement

telling all who pass

this is the house where someone was careless with love

I will never look at loose balloons in quite the same way. A marker of carelessness. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
A Wonderful Work

I might only swap out "deflated" for "defeated" . . . or maybe not.

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Very Nice

reminds me of the Tom Waits song " House Where Nobody Lives"

same type of feeling

the balloon analogy was wonderful

Thank you for this

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