now it reveals them
bright eye-catcher, perpetual movement
telling all who pass
this is the house where someone was careless with love
I will never look at loose balloons in quite the same way. A marker of carelessness. Thanks
I might only swap out "deflated" for "defeated" . . . or maybe not.
reminds me of the Tom Waits song " House Where Nobody Lives"
same type of feeling
the balloon analogy was wonderful
Thank you for this
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