The story was great. It struck a very true cord, coming from a married man who loves to play similar games with his wife. My only comment is that the story was a little short. Another 300 - 500 words and it would have been perfect. Good job!
That was totally sexy! I'd love to see a sequal!!
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The story was great. It struck a very true cord, coming from a married man who loves to play similar games with his wife. My only comment is that the story was a little short. Another 300 - 500 words and it would have been perfect. Good job!
Nice!!!!!!!!!!
That was totally sexy! I'd love to see a sequal!!
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