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by Syndra Lynn03/28/04

Wow

this is wonderfully written and full of raw passion. Thank you for baring your soul.

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by Tathagata03/29/04

Yes

been there.
It's funny I kept thinking of " tanning" for some reason.
: )
There's nothing like looking at your face and body and seeing every decision you ever made written there.
just remember...that's what makes you who and what you are today.
and you are a wonderful poet
Thank you for this

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