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I'm sorry
for your pain but thankful you captured it so well.
" brine seering like fire'
is a great line
Thank you for this
Thank you
It was a hard experience, but I did feel better after I wrote this. Thank you very much for your feedback. :)
Wisdom of the Ages~
Don't cry because it's 'Over',,,, Smile,,, because "It" 'Happened'!!!!!
The worst day of love, is eclipsed by the BEST day of Love.
You get up and do it AGAIN!!! Cuz it feels SO good!!
What a wonderful read!
This was very sad but you made it through, didn't you? The images were greatly done and I really felt the pain. I'm sure so many at one time can relate to this piece. Thanks for the read, Dana
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Seering is a good word as used here to detail a love gone.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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