Way to short in my opinion but for what there was I gave you a "5" anyway ~~ you could have added a few more para's just to make it hotter.!**
This is a great start. I would love to see where it goes from here.
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Way to short in my opinion but for what there was I gave you a "5" anyway ~~ you could have added a few more para's just to make it hotter.!**
More please
This is a great start. I would love to see where it goes from here.
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