All Comments on 'Across the Hall Pt. 01'

by masterjk

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
To short a story for this start.

We need the rest of the story to see where you are going to go. Please make the stories longer. At least 2 pages. I hope you have part 2 ready or will lose your start.

indysubmaleindysubmalealmost 8 years ago
nice start

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More please - when is the next chapter??

More please - when is the next chapter??

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Masterjk's mum took away his tablet until he is 12. No more silly stories for another two years.

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