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Across the Hall Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/31/16

To short a story for this start.

We need the rest of the story to see where you are going to go. Please make the stories longer. At least 2 pages. I hope you have part 2 ready or will lose your start.

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by indysubmale06/02/16

nice start

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

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by Anonymous01/21/17

More please - when is the next chapter??

More please - when is the next chapter??

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