We need the rest of the story to see where you are going to go. Please make the stories longer. At least 2 pages. I hope you have part 2 ready or will lose your start.
Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
More please - when is the next chapter??
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To short a story for this start.
We need the rest of the story to see where you are going to go. Please make the stories longer. At least 2 pages. I hope you have part 2 ready or will lose your start.
nice start
Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
More please - when is the next chapter??
More please - when is the next chapter??
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Across the Hall Pt. 01 or
More submissions by masterjk.