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Why stop at the good part?
But make no mistake that wasn't the best part, the best part was Mark finally expressing his side of concerns for their relationship. Jennifer having doubts and ideas became a staple by now but his gentler side never got the spotlight, until now that is and I absolutely love it. Her parents also took thee whole staying-over a lot lighter, was hoping form more snickering and grunts from dad but then again maybe he's saving it for the next week. Considering we also got to see the more private side from her mom I have no real complaints abut this chapter, it deliver lots more than I hoped in the best of cases.
Is the 5* even a question by now?
Why stop at the good part?
That's the hook to keep you coming back for the next story!
still cute
and fun to watch as they learn about each other.
Like you need a hook...
...to keep us interest in the story, more like one to keep us away from demanding more ;)
It's perfect as it is, yet I'll admit I am highly interested in their exploration of each other because there is always some higher motive and sensible explanation behind it all afterwards. And Jess pretty much shares it with any other girl that shows interest while blushing like a ripe tomato.
Love
It is so beautiful to see their love as it develops -- they are so solid with each other even as they explore "what ifs" and other concerns. They both remember that they love each other first and foremost. Keep that love growing! Keep the hair on his chest growing in as well!
5*+
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
I might just be throwing you a curveball . . .
. . . with Chapter 12. It's still in the writing stage.
Chapter 12 has been approved . . .
. . . and should appear on Saturday.
They are learning new things?
Well described their progress in their relationship and how they learn new things for their mutual benefit.
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
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