by silkstockingslover
the only reason this is getting 3 stars is it is well written, but that is it
A little rough around the edges, but still quite sexy. Just a pity that there were no pantyhose involved! Well, well,there's always the sequel (hint, hint!) Either way, keep writing and we'll certainly keep reading!
You are by all means the Best Writer on Literotica. Whatever storyline you use, it's always a turnon. Thank You
This is terribly corny and the talking is just too unreal...Way too forced, no decent seduction. Just like a cheap porn.
Some parts are even pure wtf material. She licks her pussy and still pretends to be shocked that she had an orgasm? And the girl says sorry because she had it?! I don't even...
The story seems forced. I have enjoyed following ur work but lately have not been so enthused to read them. Take more time on the final story to really hook your readers.
Browsing the top stories here is a waste of fucking time if dreck like this manages to get on it.
Is Veronica's daughter like Mom a dominant woman? IF so, give Becky to her to use as she pleases. She will make her shave all disgusting hair from her box, and present such for inspection. Then share her with other girlfriends for such pleasure. she will put her on a strict diet to lose fatty belly and be thin for fucking by boys of minority status along with submitting to dominant black women as well. College plans changed for a life of debauchery submissIve living in the projects breeding babies for welfare food checks. All for a scarf?
This is a great series. Unlike another person who commented I like the fact that Becky is a bit hairy. I came of age in the 80s. Back then most women didn't shave themselves bald and they also wore nylons all the time. Keep up the great writing.
582. Short and interesting, but maybe a bit overdone in the examination portion. Always nice to see a virgin turned.