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A Family Holiday Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/02/16

Part 3

Nice story. I can't wait for part 3.

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by Anonymous06/03/16

SO when he gets loose?

He takes their phones (what are they going to do? Beat him up?) goes to his attorney, who in turn goes to the Police and the women go to prison. For a long long time. The morale of this stupidity? NEVER take pictures when you're committing numerous crimes. Really dumb story.

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by NaughtyOne8806/04/16

Well Done

Very good. Please continue!

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by Anonymous06/05/16

Take it to an attorney?

To the critic who said to take the phones to an, attorney... Gee... I wonder how that conversation goes. "Hey, so I have these photos as proof..." "Proof of what?" "Proof of... Um... Well, there,s this one where it's me jerking off with panties... And this one where my two sister's in law are sitting on me... And this one where I'm sucking a dick..." "Okay and, these prove what now? That you're a pervert?" "Sorry, never mind."

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by ProfDavros06/06/16

Creative solution

Magic, creactive and sexy. Loved the payback and can see how much fun is possible in this scenario. Looking forward to more well written stories such as this.

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by jake121206/28/16

Thanks all...

I've made some edits to the series, in parts 2 and 3, which will hopefully show up here soon... part 4 is on its way! I think there will be five or six parts in all... in which all gets revealed... stay tuned!

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by Anonymous07/11/16

I loved your story, please continue to add chapters.

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