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In Japanese: Kokuhaku

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by legerdemer06/06/16

A sexy tale

...writ in a lovely, self-assured poem with such crisp imagery. That last stanza is a lovely closing, with two last killer lines:

"making a cool drink of promise
for a hot evening yet to come."

Really sexy, Neo.

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by Piscator06/09/16

Thanks for these glimpses of another world, another life.

Now back to the garden and mosquitoes.

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