All Comments on 'Changes Ch. 02'

do we have to wait a week for the next chapter, I need more,,,,

I am really liking this series. Oh Vanessa, please call Heather!!

Geez! Do you have to go into every detail, including grocery shopping? It's okay to take time to set the premise, I suppose, but (yawn!) it's a little too slow-moving.

it was a pretty good start even though it is part 2, can't wait for the next one

I can't wait for next week send another this week. I love the chemistry between the characters.

it is worth the wait

Thank you i loved it

~ c

Foreplay at its best

Re: Slow moving complaint. You are doing a great job, don't let anyone intimidate you to build your story any faster than you wish. Personally, I love it, just wish there would be a new chapter every day. Rarely do I comment on stories, but you have done such a superb job that I can't help but say so.

Yes, have to agree with previous comments, just needs, I think, a little judicious cutting and editing to keep the pace going. Otherwise a promising author in the making.

So let's see how they remaining chapters turn out.

M

Not sure why these bozo's think you should cut anything or limit the detail. A good story has a solid foundation. If was to say anything negative it would be that the chapters are short. I prefer longer stories with a slow build up I just don't like having to wait. :)

Keep on doing what your doing it's great. I have read the first 5 chapters a couple of times to see if I missed anything.

Personally I like a slow smouldering more than a loud bang, really getting into Heather's head (which is the best part), wanted to give her a hug by the end there.

The flirtation with flirtation is great, and the powerful chemistry between the two main characters is really coming through.

*leaps headlong into ch 3*

I agree with the last comments. More detail makes a better story.

What happen in real life, its almost ever slow motion ..... School and high school and college takes some 15 years l.... Learning moving with our hormones takes may a lifetime ....... Theories and practice are like different universe and coming here to wisdom needs a lifetime ...... Having sex and reproducing needs no brain, but being a lovely parent with empathy needs a lifetime ...... So your journey here is fine speeding

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Nice flow to your writing, this story is easy to read. Also good character development, we are getting to learn them very well. I usually don't read lesbian stories, but happened to start this one and now I can't put it down!