All Comments on 'Father, Forgive Me Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Keep going.

Good lead in. Now let's get to the good stuff. :--)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Very good lead in.

These seem to be vignettes, and barely scratching the surface. Awesome story, but you might want to add more in the next chapter.

KarenBethKarenBethalmost 8 years ago
patiently waiting...

Beautiful! I need more!

Please don't keep us waiting too long

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Mmmm got me all wet

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Please Continue

Please please continue this story, very soon!

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I am a 28 year old grad student who enjoys reading erotica and writing, so I thought I'd give it a go.

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