Is femdom that I as a female can enjoy, challenging the sub physically, mentally, and sexually while also caring for the sub. I am a fan of D/s that fulfills and lifts up both parties regardless of the genders. You have me cautiously optimistic.
The detail and tone of the story draws me in and makes me want more. I also like the way you portray her as a strong, confident, caring Domme and him as a willing, devoted submissive, even if he is a bit tentative with her instructions. I'm anxious to see what else she has on her table.
Reading your story- I feel like I was there.
Interesting that she calls him 'my Prince.' It's a unique choice. In my imagination most subs would prefer to be called something that implies a lower status or- sad to say it- feminizing.
I love stories where the man is perfectly trained and totally focused on serving the woman who owns him. Can there be ANY higher calling for a man to be entirely committed to serving his Lady as she wishes?
Granted, it would have been difficult to have a cum-eating scene without any cum, but a chastity device is so much better applied to a package that is already hungry. To each her own...
I'll be following this series with reserved interest.
5 stars though.
Thank you for the comments. I have been working on the next few chapters, sadly life has a way of getting in the way sometimes. :) Hopefully I don't disappoint.
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Is femdom that I as a female can enjoy, challenging the sub physically, mentally, and sexually while also caring for the sub. I am a fan of D/s that fulfills and lifts up both parties regardless of the genders. You have me cautiously optimistic.
Wonderfuly Descriptive
The detail and tone of the story draws me in and makes me want more. I also like the way you portray her as a strong, confident, caring Domme and him as a willing, devoted submissive, even if he is a bit tentative with her instructions. I'm anxious to see what else she has on her table.
A marvellous beginning ...
... I can't wait to read the next chapter! Very well done -- five stars.
Lucky male sub
Reading your story- I feel like I was there.
Interesting that she calls him 'my Prince.' It's a unique choice. In my imagination most subs would prefer to be called something that implies a lower status or- sad to say it- feminizing.
I really hope you keep writing.
Nice
Hope he get to,worship her beautiful feet.. Can't wait to read more..
A remarkable start!
I love stories where the man is perfectly trained and totally focused on serving the woman who owns him. Can there be ANY higher calling for a man to be entirely committed to serving his Lady as she wishes?
Edge first- then chastity
Granted, it would have been difficult to have a cum-eating scene without any cum, but a chastity device is so much better applied to a package that is already hungry. To each her own...
I'll be following this series with reserved interest.
5 stars though.
Thank you
Thank you for the comments. I have been working on the next few chapters, sadly life has a way of getting in the way sometimes. :) Hopefully I don't disappoint.
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