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Cool opening
You did a very great job with the opening chapter. Now I'm waiting to see how this chain develops. :)
An excellent start...
a few hanging sentence fragments and one misplaced apostrophe, but overall pretty good. You might want to change dieing to dying, both are words, but with very different meanings.
I like the view of the world through the reversed image of the mirror, it will be fun playing with that... good stuff.
jim : )
Another fine endeavor by Art....
Once again your choice of matter for a erotic story line its just wonderful.
Keep us happy by giving us more.....
Sweet
Very enthralling, this is a good story line and a great story I can hardly wait to see what's next.
Nice
loved the way you sat this one up!! :)
Well, well Well,,,,
Pretty good thus far...
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