All Mom's Holes

WOW!

Great story, that was fucking hot!!! Sure as hell wish I had a mom like that!

UNDRESSED

How did she get undressed? Not very descriptive.

First story.

I could tell this was your first story .You left a few things out .It's a good story and with some work it could be a great story. Please keep writing and find someone that can edit your work and give you some help . Good Luck and hope to see another story from you soon .

Thanks, everyone!

Thank you for all of the feedback on my first story. Much appreciated! Hopefully more to come in the future.

Good story!

Simple and straightforward. Pretty hot sex. Competent writing skills. ****

Very good.

Nothing wrong with a story that gets right to the point. Well done.

hot story!!!

that was awesome and the ass fuck could have been longer but awesome and years earlier in my twenties i want to anal fuck my aunt when she was 35 and i wish i had a piece of my aunts awesome ass.I almost had her are and she wanted to sleep with me........but hot story!!!

"...I think you can start calling me Patsy now."

Nah, it's hotter when he calls her Mom while they're fucking.

HOT READ****

Nasty and SEXY!!!!!!

so bad

So the mom sees her son with a hard on and she just ups and fuck him? Whats the point of being a writer if you tell no story. *

Great first story!

A great first submission. Short, sweet and hot. Perfect jerk-off material! Thanks for this.

Yes, Mom definitely has a hot, nasty side to her !! She has been planning this based on easy dropping on her son and girlfriend screwing :) Great story, we need more for sure now that he can call her Patsy !! I had a friend who use to screw his Mom as his father was much older and couldn't. He said it was quite a ride ......
Thanks !!

"Lay back"

Please learn the words lay and lie. "Lay back" doesn't mean what you think it means.

At what stage ...

did mom actually get naked?
There's no mention of sonny boy getting his first ever look at her naked body.
Every boy goes ape shit when he first sees his mom's bare tits, and damn near has a heart attack if she shows him her cunt, so there's no way either of these would happen without him describing them in detail.

Three holes

It is better when a mom has three guys at once and cum at the sametime.that is what we did to my mom and aunt

I was also let down by this story's lack of description, but you can't fault the author for saying "lay back". Characters are allowed to use poor grammar.
3* for effort.