An Eye-Opening Game

Really?

That's it? Not sure what I just skimmed over, but it wasn't a story. You know, plots, drama, suspense, that stuff? No, guess you don't.

So so...

Good writing, however not much of a tale. So so. Two stars.

Poker waitress and poker lose your women stories have been done about a million times so I think it would be hard to squeeze any thing interesting or original from them. Only small difference here is only her husband had sex with her in the end. If the next installment / step is the guys having sex with Lilly too, consider that would make it a million +1 times.

Good writing skills, directed towards a stale story setting.

Originality isn't everything

Sure, we all knew where this was going from the very beginning and the slight plot adjustments from the norm weren't much to write home about. However, something done over again, but done well is still enjoyable and I thought it was well put together. You could nit-pick various things about it, but what the hell, it was just good fun and after an evening of watching the news I needed that. Probably not worthy of the 5* I gave it, but I chose not to live up to my handle and go with the moment.

I'm not tired

of poker wife stories but I'm not fond of stories where the wife only gets fucked by her husband. This story was well written and could have been so good if the other guys had gotten to fuck her...especially the black guy with the big dick. It was obvious that she wanted him to fuck her. 3*.

This was definitely a six-star effort

Superb pacing, and, of course, very well-written sex. Thank you.

what kind of a low life creep would get off on his wife fucking his poker buddies.

Only the little boy perverts on this site, story not my thing but at least he is not a cockold.

REALITY Check...

To the guys who 'complained' because only the husband got to fux his wife:
PLEASE just STFU - if you don't like the story the way the author wrote it, then grow a pair & write your own story. submit it here for free, and allow the world of anonymous internet trolls to post their comments about YOUR level of literary genius...

To the Author:
A flush does NOT beat a full house! The rest of the story was prety good, and forget what the idiots up there ^^^ said, keep writing, keep publishing, your readers will either like it or they won't, but don't ever let that stop you. However, little details (like a Full House ALWAYS Beats a Flush, ALWAYS Has & ALWAYS Will!) can make or break a story, so for that reason ONLY I gave you 4 Stars - otherwise it would have definitely been a 5 Star Effort.

Very hot

Fantastic story. Enjoyed it very much

This was a very, very hot fantasy, not quite a story, more like a chapter out of a story...

...but definitely part of a larger, father- reaching story....yup definitely lacking a couple of necessary chapters to be a complete story.
Besides, there was no hint that Lily had that in her. I'm slightly disappointed that hubby didn't get upset in the least (at least to a normal, rational husband level of upset).
Gee, with acceptance of that kind of show, she's almost as likely to start a gangbang at the next card game they host.
Yup, completely lacking the rest of the story. Oh, and don't forget, the prequel....if this is a first, it's one hell of a first! If not, we need to know more about Lily's past.

Good Read

I enjoyed your story and I found it stimulating. I wish that my hubby would play poker so that I could entertain them...but in a little black dress.

Seeing the writer die the death of a thousand cuts would be fun.

Boy that lilly has guts. . . Would love to have guts like and be Lilly at my husband's poker game. . .

Hot wife at poker night

Let's see, there are about 10,000 of these stories and some of them done a lot better. Somewhere between a two and a three so I'll be generous and give you a three.

With friends like that

Who needs enemies? And do either of them think none of the participants won't tell anyone? That's probably the worst and most unbelievable line in this mess.
1 star.

I would've killed my wife but she was hot and never touched or let them touch her so it's all good.

I'll see you and raise the table a bit.

Not one of those guy tipped his waitress, really. Friend, neighbor, coworker, I wood of had to rub her behind and beg forgivness.
Randy I wood of pulled my belt from my pants and made her kiss her paddle, while I heated up her bottom for being that naughty.
Lets us know if you host next months poker night.

if u dont like this kind of thing why do u read

in deep down they like this just dont want to admit