by Watcher98
hi....i just read your story, and i just wanted to say i really enjoyed it.....the writing was very good, and i loved the story.....you got me very turned on, so thankyou
!! i've just written a couple of stories, i'm waiting for confirmation on them, so maybe you can enjoy mine as much as i enjoyed yours.
p.s. write something else again soon, please!
Ignore all the idiots who call you a wimp. It's a very good story
Nicely written. Jealousy and humiliation are themes that arent written about enough. What about some more??
This and the sequel are one of the best stories on literotica. It's incredibly hot and it's also extremely well written down to the small details...this goes for both stories. I only wish the writer would have continued to write.
That story was soooo hot! Tom was a stud, no wonder she dumped her bf. lol
It amazes me that some idiots can't seem to understand that a story is a fantasy! If they don't like it, their option is not to read it. Anyway, with all that said, I always look for stories that are well written, immediately grab my attention, and create erotic images in my own mind. I'll be reading more of your work!
WAY hot, especially the end! How big is Tom? I like to imagine that he's about as big as my own best friend, about 8x6.5
I do not understand some of the comments above. It is a cuckold story. The heroine cannot possibly be one man's woman. The big dick and domination are just there because in the literary genre they are kind-of expected ingredients, one could say they are there 'by popular demand'. 4 stars from me
I wouldve broken up with the bitch the minute she didnt stop talking about toms dick
You capture the details of sex extremely well. As to those who are worried that the story is perverse, what are you doing here if not looking for perversity? You are reading stories in a watch/being watched category, what do you expect? Also, the very last sentence was a very nice touch.
but also a simple jerk and skeet one, plain and stupid characters & abysmal plot.
Even for a low budget 90's porn to scraggy. Serves the poor and the developmentally challenged without value.
This is probably the very best cuckold story I've ever read. I loved it.