Death By Fucking Ch. 23

Thank you for this great story!!!!!

You have brought me many hour of enjoyment with this series. I am greatful that you have shared it with us. Please keep the good work coming.

Made me sad

Great ending, but it just made me so sad, Still awsome way to end it, going out together

Still crying

I knew it was coming. The tenor from the start of this chapter told me that. It's been a great story, one of my most reread ever. Still, it's simply a story...so why am I still weeping like I've just lost the closest members of my family?
Because I have.
I've loved this story from the very first chapter, and accepted Andrew, Dee, and Donnie into my mind as if they were my closest companions.

Bullet, I'm looking foreward to reading about the EKids and their lives, but not tonight. I wouldn't be able to see the text for the tears.

Fabulous!!

This series was excellent. The character development was such that you actually cared about them. This isn't the forum where I expected to find that. There is more than passion here, there is love.

Great Romance, Great SciFi

Your romance story was incredible, the characters felt real.
I like the evolution of mankind theory. Good thinking there,even though I myself am a believer and would have included some spiritual development as well. But it's your story, and it's awesome!

And so it ends

After a long era, our main characters in the story fade away. Leaves me with a bittersweet feeling.

All in all, an excellent storyline, with appropriate dynamic plots. But most of all, it felt human.

The End Cometh..... You are a true master.

I followed the story from the begining and dearly loved every moment of it. The developement of your characters is second only to your plot development and that by slim margine. the bittersweet fondness you bring out in the telling is by far the most engrossing part of your tale and I look forward to the eKids tale.

boy do I pick them!

I had been cruising through the Stories by Ratings and kept seeing this series by you... "Hmmm think I better check this writer out..." and, for no particular reason, chose this story to read. Well, by jumping in at this point in your story...I felt connected and moved. Wow! Can't wait to go back and read the beginning of the series. FANTASTIC!!!!

Wow!!!

I had seen this series on the site for so long now, but if I'm honest the title put me off reading it. Then on saturday I had nothing to read and I openeed part 1, I have just read all 23 chapters in four days...It was superb, and I am now going to read the eKids series too. Thank you for writing it...it was truly a great story...

A must read Story

This is without a doubt the best story I have ever read. This story envoked true emotions in me, at times I laughed, cried, was arroused, the whole gamut. I feel priviliged to have been able to have shared a small part of it. thank you so much. And by the way there isnt a rating scale that does it justice, this story is off the scale.

My eyes are still wet...

"Death by fucking." I knew it was coming, the end of the lives of those people who loved each other so much and were complete. When I realized that what I was reading was the last time a couple would make love, and that after that there would be *nothing*, it was such a dramatic, beautiful, tragic moment that my heart broke a little and I left with them. (whispers) "Wow..."

Bravo. I loved every minute of it !

I must admit the title of the story made me hesitate, but seeing how many chapters made it into the toplist made me curious. You had my attention from paragraph one. Wonderful job.

I love a happy ending.

Finally got around to reading this.

I hope I'm as fortunate when it's my time.

Stunning

Your story was beautiful and stunningly written from the first chapter. The final sadness at the end hit me so hard…I had forgotten how to shed tears but now I remember.

Unforgettable

You will never know what your story did to me.
Just thank you.

Good but...

It was a good story. It had an interesting plot and enjoyable characters. But i'm a nitpicker and some of it just didn't make sense. I know it's fiction but i was just confused. Why didn't he just have fun with a cup instead of sleeping with all those women? And wouldn't making all the new species related make it hard to stop in-breeding? i was just wondering why you put it all on Andrew instead of them finding other smart men to act as studs. I still got teary eyed at the end tho.

In the end...

It's odd to be sad for fictional characters. You did a wonderful job developing them, and fortunately for me you're well into the tales of the ekids. I'll still miss the original cast, though.
I mean this next bit to be complimentary, but you might find it vain: Andrew reminds me of me, 'the girls' of my wife. (You did a wonderful job, by the way, of describing how it feels to be in love, and what that means to a devoted lover.)
In the end, I think ALL good characters remind the reader of himself and those he loves (or hates, if that's the intention) and all good authors have the knack for doing so.

That's a theory I'm working on.

beautiful

One of the best stories ever. I was up till 4am last night reading and started again at 9am today. I couldn't stop reading. Wonderful deep characters, a very engaging plot, and amazing erotic scenes. One of the best on literotica.

great series

Loved it
Mike from Texas

Robert Heinlein Salutes You

Hyperbole hyperbole hyperbole. It had wit and romance a story that was in all things excellent. Flawless victory. Keep up the good work.

Fine story

The fact that I only started reading this yesterday and have just finished ch. 23 is the best review I can give. Enthralling and a fitting ending for a utopian fantasy. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC.

death by fucking

all the comment i read said it all, i got teary chocked up and sad at the end totally great loved it .ie this is my first comment in this forum, shows i really love this!!

Fantastic

This has to be the best novel on the site.I hope that you can write more.

Wonderfull

Thank you.

With the last chapters I was crying for the loss of these charectures. I will miss them

(until i return to read this again :-)

the best ever!!!

amazing should make a real novel. i hope ekids will be just as great!new to this place so if anyone knows any good stories email me the link at brandon_chapman56@hotmail.com.

Awe-inspiring

Possibly the best story I have ever read. The sex was fantastic, but that was only the frosting. This story was about love - a love every human wishes they had. And that love story was told so well, so deeply felt, that I had tears in my eyes throughout the last half of it. The author just grabbed my heart and wouldn't let go. The characters were so pure, and good; no evil, no hatred to be found. I have rarely, if ever read anything that moved me so deeply.
Thank you so much.

Brenda

You have reset the bar

You are an incredible story teller, and my year has definitely been much richer thanks to you and this story. It's amazing, what you've done here.

Thank You

I'm glad I found this story after it was completed. I would have suffered waiting for the next chapter.

Excellent in all ways.

I just finished one of your stories...

The story Death by fucking... Wow you really put emotion into it.. at first I just picked it up because I was looking for a good story that I could get off too by the end of Chapter 1 I was interested... By the end of Chapter 5 I was skipping some of the sex parts because honestly they were greatly written but they just weren't the part I wanted to read. The characters were interesting they were involved in fact the when the part about Donnie dying happened I cried a bit and the end when Andrew and Dee Dee died I cried more... You wrote a wonderful story with impeccable characters that drew me in.
You are an extremely talented writer. I wish you luck on all of your future projects.

wow...

OK, I am big enough to admit it. I'm a strait guy and you still made me cry...
Thanx for this story.

Let's clarify

to anon who said 'why didn't he just have fun into a cup?': Guess what? Look at the title of the website. Probably jerking off into a cup isn't a lot of people's idea of erotica.

This is a time when a suspension of disbelief is in order. I think the majority of readers would prefer to read about sex rather than artificial insemination.

Just saying'

there are no words to describe how great this story is so I shall not try

keep writing

E-publish this

This story first posted at least 8 yrs ago. I'm reading it for the first time in 2012, and I am blown away. This would actually make a good movie! I feel such a loss...I miss DonnieDeeDeeDrew. Great writing.

excellent!!

I read this story a while back and revisited it just now. Excellent writing and interesting story line.
lastchancebill

Fun story but.........

WAY,WAY,WAY,WAY,WAY too long. You could have tightened things up and subscribed to the philosophy that less is more on several occasions. But I did enjoy most of it.

Wonderful

Thanks for a great story. Wasn't quite sure where the story was going, but I sure enjoyed the ride! Looking forward to reading about the eKids. Here's my email, love to see the photos: gary.l.jones@hotmail.com.

Thanks again!

This is...

one hell of a tale mixing politics, philosophy, religion, eugenics...crap - the list is almost endless (and some great sex - lol). Masterfully done - thanks for your time and talent!

Wow!

That is all. Just Wow!