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Ellie's Messy Swim Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by BondageBabe81506/08/16

Wet.

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by FASfan06/08/16

Well done on writing your first story

I enjoyed reading it and I hope you will add more chapters to it soon. Bravo! Four stars.

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by Anonymous06/08/16

Rape

I see no consent here.

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by Anonymous06/08/16

its rape

She DID NOT give her consent AT ALL.

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by joeyt9006/08/16

This cannot be rape

This cannot be classed as rape as there has been no sexual act only if/when the man forces his penis into the vagina, anus or mouth of another person when that person doesn't want him to do so.

So far there has been non of that happen.

Plus there are non-consent tags onto this story.

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by foolscap06/08/16

but it certainly is sexual assault

Sexual assault is any type of sexual contact or behavior that occurs without the explicit consent of the recipient. Falling under the definition of sexual assault are sexual activities as forced sexual intercourse, forcible sodomy, child molestation, incest, fondling, and attempted rape.Apr 1, 2016

https://www.justice.gov/ovw/sexual-assault

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by storytime9006/08/16

Apology

Hi all. I see some of you enjoyed the story and that some of you might not have.

After reading the coments and agreeing with them i have put an edited version of the first 2 stories up with a warning which will hopefully swap over the first two chapters soon. i realise i probabaly should have put a warning in before but as my first time writing i never thought about it.

If you just enjoy bondage and possible humiliation/ enhibitionism then please wait till chapter 3 as the story changes to consent and will make sense (i am making chapter 3 a second chapter 1 for people that don't want the non consent start.)

Again thanks for the coments.

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