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phonied-up
Ridiculous example of how a man thinks women ought to communicate.
I stopped reading about a third
of the way. I just couldnt get into it.
Starch & bother, no froth.
This was weird. Written from a dude's POV & thete was absolutely no character development. You wrote nothing to engage me or make me even care a little about your characters or the situation they were in. It was boring, really. If I wanted to get off on a sexually charged chat transcript, I'd sext my GF, but yours lost me pretty quick. I stopped reading carefully about midway & just skimmed through to see if you'd change it up, spice it up, but, no, you didn't. It's got nothing that holds a reader's interest, nothing erotic or exciting, just you jerking off to something in your head that you've failed to capture & share with an audience. At best it was boring. At the worst I mostly felt embarassed for you for writing this empty piece of nothing.
2 stars is the most positive & generous rating for this kind of dreck.
Amazing
Thank you.
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