A nice piece of writing. I thought you raised the temperature at a good steady pace and the boy's reaction at the end was credible (for once!).
Brilliant - and true erotic writing at it's best.
Not bad, but nobody got fucked!
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Well written
A nice piece of writing. I thought you raised the temperature at a good steady pace and the boy's reaction at the end was credible (for once!).
Perfect
Brilliant - and true erotic writing at it's best.
No sex?
Not bad, but nobody got fucked!
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