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barely skimmed
this story and wondered if the author was an ESL writer so I checked her bio. Location was Dreamland, I expected womewhere on the planet but not USA educated. In the subtitle, Angle and I wondered if thes is a geometry lesson because ANGEL is the proper spelling when dealing with Lucifer! And in the story, Lu )implied as a male) is the female spelling, Lou is the male spelling. You need an editor who knows what they're doing.
Hot, as only the Devil can make it
Very entertaining story, despite some misspellings.
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