All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd: Total Control'

This was a nice rebound from last week's. It seemed like you just mailed that one in. Not up to your usual standards. This is back to your normal excellence.

Finally got the CEO and made her a Cum Slut. You should do a Follow-up Down the Road say 5 years later.

Amazing I was looking forward to this for a while now please I beg do a follow up maybe make him rethink about destroying everything and using the drug to establish himself or something thank you for an amazing story

I have to say, the end feels a bit rushed, especially for you.

This is a very good series . Was a fun read and very hot story .Good job on this one .Very well written and something we all wish we could do at some point in our lives . Thanks for the story.

Even though the revenge is complete he still has plans according to how you ended the story, so please write up a follow up so we at least knows how he did.

Have to agree the story did seem a little rushed for one of yours and it deserves an epilogue.

Very nice ending to an engaging story. Still think that you have a few follow ups you could do if the mood strikes. Would love to know more about what happened to Becky. She is the only character to depart after being changed. Loved this whole story line.

I have to give it to you, that was one of the most strangely erotic but yet hilarious stories I think I've read on this website. Very well written story flowed nicely when I love the revenge part. Being a nerd that grew up getting bullied, you just made every one of my dreams come true. Thank you and keep up the good work

Great story, I hope you write more parts

N.

but the rest made up for it

Thank you for this series, i liked these stories very much.

what a great series this was sorry to see that you are finishing it though

It's fucking great and imagining is so easy with your skilled writing

This series was great to read. Each chapter generally topping the next. However, this last installment left me wanting. Please understand, I love your writings, but was just hoping for more as you finished this series.

But I think it deserves an epilogue set a few years after Brandon becomes vice president of this company so we can see what becomes of all of the people he took control over. Does he free any of them or keep them as they are forever? What happens to the now gay bully? Does Brandon eventually marry one of them, this new secretary character, his sister, his mother? And given what was introduced to her in this chapter I think we would all like to see what happens to the boss long term after this. I know you work on a lot of stories, but I think this one really deserves a little bit more.

I think the ending could use some tweaking; showing Karen where she is in the hierarchy, Sarah getting pregnant with someone's baby, giving Karen the antidote as well as the more intense orgasms formula. Also, you wrote how he had another full mind-control potion. Who was that for?

Brandon sells Sarah to a black dominatrix for 99 cents and gives Sarah final orders to breed black babies to atone for her race issues.

Cant wait to read what happens next hun and like everyone else I would love to read what happens to Sarah, Karen, his aunt, sister, mom, and the cheerleader.

It's just so good, wish there was more...

Why oh why does it have to end??????

I know you are probably sick of writing about Brandon. But I like the way he gets his Revenge. Now he needs to Procreate maybe with the Board members Wifes or Daughters. And why not Mrs Leveen or Aunty .

Keep going

I truely always have enjoyedyour stories and this one is no exception

"You're a bimbo cum buckaroo."

I almost died laughing. It still hurts. But it's a good pain.

The Idea of Taking over the Board Room. Maybe by then Sarah will have had her Child and working on #2

Make Karen his girlfriend and have his mother sister and aunt pregnant by him

Too much of a good thing is too much. Writing is excellent, just more than was needed

It seems there is a lot of potential for this story. The Board (maybe), his home life with Karen (definitely), and his newfound "job opportunity" would all be great ideas

You need to pick up again. You still need to get The cheerleading bitch Crystal for that guy. Maybe spray the cheerleaders

I really hate to see this story line end, but I also recognize that there are only so many places you can take it. Another fantastic thread of stories. I absolutely love your writing!

Just keep writing

"You're a bimbo cum bitch"

"You're a bimbo cum buckaroo".....

Laughed out loud!

I'm not sure if it is possible but please keep this going. I'm so wet right now. God. I loved this.

I enjoyed the series emensly and the ending was GREAT, if only to short. I was so happy you brought in the janitors, that was icing on the revenge cake!

Thus was one of my favorite story lines from you. While I understand that you may have moved on it would be great if you added to this again. Many unanswered questions about the characters. We never learned the fallout from the tasks given to the sister and her cheerleader friend or the bitch neighbor. Hope you will consider continuing thus in the future

So many unanswered questions about Brandon position, Karen, Becky, and Sarah ect.

To get the Boardroom and Turn all of them to his Way. He can have Karen be his Assistant using the Bitch to get Contracts. and Still have the Janitor's use her.

really good whens the next chapter

But please don't stop now, we need to see him take over the firm, sort out the board, take the company to new heights - and then marry Karen.

Please continue, there is more to cum with this story, a lot more.

Rapier

my question I left on a comment on an earlier part of the story about walking up and spraying people with the drug. I figured he would have to come up with another way to apply the drug as not to be caught, the air vent was good thinking.

I'm not usually a fan of mind control stories because I can't see them happening in real life. However, in this series, I really liked the drug premise and Brandon's coming to realize the danger such a drug would create if it got into the wrong hands. I also liked the retribution for the mother who enabled her son's bullying. I think every nerd has the fantasy of retaliating against those who attacked, belittled, or otherwise harassed them, and it was nice to see that played out by someone who eventually developed some morals about how they did it.

I really enjoyed this story and look forward to reading the next chapter.

Thank you for the great work. I loved every chapter as you walked me along through each event with a hard cock and a very horny ass and watering mouth. Great job

Even for a fictional story this was SO bad I'm STILL laughing! Unbelievable.

This series was fucking awesome, I loved every chapter, too bad it wasn't longer. But other than that, it was highly enjoyable. Again, it's a shame it couldn't be longer. Keep on writing.

To Ultimate Humiliation,to have Sarah turned into the skankiest office whore in history and to add insult to injury he may have even conceived his child with the woman who fired him,talk about getting screwed both literally and figuritively,Sarah should have lost the bitchy attitude and treated Brandon and everybody with respect but because she didn't she is now paying the price for her crimes.

Maybe one day Sarah will learn from her mistakes and become a better person.

To be honest I don't normally read the whole story that is submitted. Just the good parts if you know what I mean. Anyway, I found myself drown in with this series from start to finish. Thinking at times who I would like to use that spray on.

please do 1 more chapter

Are you sure you used "faggot" often enough? I know you're not 14YO. You can do better.

es ist eine sehr geile Story, schade, dass sie zu ende ist, hätte mich interessiert, was weiter aus Parker wird und lisa..aber alle Geschichten haben mal ein ende, leider

I agree with the other commenter. Your derogatory use of the term, "faggot" makes you sound like a homophobic adolescent.

please do another chapter

Add one more chapter making all your slaves with cure. And make you to top with luxury life with all workers under your thumb. Alpha Male.

He should have had her take his shitty cock in her mouth right from her ass. Maybe have Karen eat the anal cream pie out of Sarah's ass.

Have read this series several times and still want more please continue writing this story has so many places to go. Thanks for sharing your stories with us.

I enjoyed the story Nd wish there was at least one more chapter but understand that you have to end it eventually.

Very good story. All of it and loved the humor

Ended too soon

where can I get that spray 😂😂😂😂😂

Fun. Definitely revenge of the nerds. Agree with other, want an epilogue - Crystal? Becky? Tara?, Karen?, Aunt? Mom? Carrie? - Who cares about the bully and his mom?

I loved how Brandon took care of his friends too.

It was cool how every woman that they were going to manipulate him even after being sprayed.

you keep some good twists and fun

excellently written

thank you

A Truly Disgusting Story with no morally redeeming qualities.

great series but hoping there is more...maybe?

Love your stories; never fails to get a rise from me. Keep up your good work.

Loved it! Always gets a rise from me....

Absolutely great series! Loved every word of it!

Loved the series mate

more plz

E

Losing his job just turned him into crazy lunatic. His revenge was a little over the top. So was the storyline. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Wow amazing I literally read all 6 chapters over the course of a couple hours. I laughed, I came, I cheered! Great story!

This would be something i would dream of. I am totally immersed in your stories.... well done

This is actually so good

This story was excellent. Well conceived and written. My only complaint is that the last chapter ended a little abruptly. It felt like the climax of the revenge story was rushed and unsatisfying. Otherwise, excellent story.

Excellent!! You should follow up and tell us who he adds and who he humiliates.

You started messing up by the end. Lisa lies to her sister, and he tells Sarah she can never order someone to do something again, but she is able to tell him to "pull it out." Otherwise, it was fantastic

If only he doesn't share to other men all those he mind control. This would be awesome. What a faggot mc. Disgusting. Can't jack of this shit because I always imagined the consequence. A.I.D.S L, SYPHILIS, WARTS AND ALL OTHER NASTY SHIT.

Wow. Loved the whole series. Don't pay attention to the complaints in the comments. They have no imagination and one of them is homophobic. I'm sorry this story is done. Great job.

Someone needs to aquire his other doses and continue the story. Damn, but you are a fine author

I enjoyed this tale & had very lengthy jack off sessions while reading it.

It was fairly well written without many homophones.a solid 4 stars.

Bill S.

442. Normally I don’t care much for revenge stories or forced sex, but I understand the gist of this story, and I allow that you did a marvelous job in the creation and revelation of it. Now that it went this far perhaps you could restote Sarah, Kathryn, Lisa, and sister and neighbors to a better life and actually be viewed as a not so bad fellow. At times he seems to have a kinder attitude.

Please write another story were he got all the women pregnant. Give us more to the saga its way to good just to stop now.

Wow! I loved this story. Could read another 10 chapters. Great work

Lots of potential, but needs a followup.

Great job, thanks for sharing your work.

Lol is it me or was this story really fucked up???

The drug wasn’t that bad. It actually gave the women permission to do what they already, secretly wanted.

As much as I feel bad for people that are completely taken advantage of, like the women (and one guy) in this story exposed to the drug, it's admittedly very difficult to feel sympathy for them when you see how they treat others. As if they're some kind of superior being and everyone is beneath them, like they are somehow entitled to be able to use them as they see fit. I guess it's true what they say: power corrupts, and this story shows it well. Is Brandon justified in what he did? Perhaps a little, though I think we can all agree, he took it WAY too far. The drug is just too powerful and the consequences too far-reaching, but at least he realized that part and destroyed the research and most of the samples. Would like to see a few more chapters though.

What about the other lady planning her revenge?

fantastic i loved the series

The story is entertaining and Silk S is a very good writer. However, I don't have no truck with incestors and mothers cannot fuck their children. Also, even if a woman is a rotten egg, you still can't rape her. Revenge has its place, but this story was kind of over the top. Nevertheless, it is a good read and the writer gets an A for originality as well as her excellent writing skills.

A little over the edge on the extent of mind control and making the "suggestions" life long. And with almost all the stories I read; Edit.

Good complete mind control fantasy. Many people have fantasies such as this.

Well, this story finally came to a conclusion. It was over the top in many ways. There is something to be said for changing people's attitudes to be nicer to people but forcing them to destroy themselves is over the top. Yeah, it is a fantasy and some people need the rush to be in control. There are too many people in control that are not nice people. I have liked a lot of the stories by the author but at this point of writing, well, not this one.

Too much fluff at the start of each part. None of that was needed.

I gave it a 3 stars fantasy. Even thought it is a fantasy, at times the orders and conditions given were over the top.

Would like another chapter , like couple of years later mainly living situations, see the little sister who finally had to leave the corporate world after having her tits enlarged to f cups. Maybe the son finds the right chemicals to control bodies or emotions

Awesome series!!!!!

That's just plain mean.