Kind of short, but not too bad. Zipper fly pants? Those are higher tech than I would expect. They have been in production on our Earth for barely over 100 years. Most worlds with orcs and minotaurs would be more likely to have button fly pants.
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not bad
Kind of short, but not too bad.
Zipper fly pants?
Those are higher tech than I would expect.
They have been in production on our Earth for barely over 100 years.
Most worlds with orcs and minotaurs would be more likely to have button fly pants.
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Back to The Farm or
More submissions by SplathouseFiction.