Simple Simon not so simple...Cliffhanger ending to the chapter...wow..
Brilliant song at the start , and so typifying....
" If failure's success then I'm keeping it hidden to show what I now should confess
So sacred it seems I'm so scared of these dreams that keep circling around in my head
I pretend that we started a thing that could end and begin as we'd want it to be
But nothing's more costly than something for free so please... please
If love is blind I don't know what I'll find in you
I don't know what you see in me"...
Suggestion for the cliffhanger from Oz as well perhaps...
"Twenty story buildings coming down on me
Mountain ranges sliding into the sea
Rivers of blood, burning red
I got a broken heart, and a broken head
I got a broken heart, and a broken head
I had a little accident, nothing too serious
Take a look at this place, take a look at this mess, nothing too serious
If you close your eyes it may go away, nothing too serious"
Take no prisoners type of chapter...
Typical Mary ;
"I wasn't going to put myself in the hands of a plastic surgeon, and I didn't want a temporary solution, like having someone heal me via spiritual means"
mmmm...One word???...bravo.....
fantastic read as always, and i hope that Mary will wake up surrounded by friends and then have to depend on them and Simon and be able to tell William and finally heal herself
English
rollercoaster ride this one
Simple Simon not so simple...Cliffhanger ending to the chapter...wow..
Brilliant song at the start , and so typifying....
" If failure's success then I'm keeping it hidden to show what I now should confess
So sacred it seems I'm so scared of these dreams that keep circling around in my head
I pretend that we started a thing that could end and begin as we'd want it to be
But nothing's more costly than something for free so please... please
If love is blind I don't know what I'll find in you
I don't know what you see in me"...
Suggestion for the cliffhanger from Oz as well perhaps...
"Twenty story buildings coming down on me
Mountain ranges sliding into the sea
Rivers of blood, burning red
I got a broken heart, and a broken head
I got a broken heart, and a broken head
I had a little accident, nothing too serious
Take a look at this place, take a look at this mess, nothing too serious
If you close your eyes it may go away, nothing too serious"
Take no prisoners type of chapter...
Typical Mary ;
"I wasn't going to put myself in the hands of a plastic surgeon, and I didn't want a temporary solution, like having someone heal me via spiritual means"
mmmm...One word???...bravo.....
so very close to salvation, yet so far
fantastic read as always, and i hope that Mary will wake up surrounded by friends and then have to depend on them and Simon and be able to tell William and finally heal herself
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