I can tell you are setting mood and tone here for subsequent chapters. You are laying the foundation for something truly erotic. Don't let the short sighted strokers here who want to pop their corks in thirty seconds and then go back to World Of Warcraft get you down... take your time with this just like you are doing and keep going! Every good series needs a solid bedrock to build upon and you are doing that here. Well done!
This is part of a series (thanks Bill)...it's based on SOME Coven practices back in the day (Gardner) ...all will be explained, please don't be negative bc you don't understand it, ok? Your choice to read or not, but no call to attack the writer. Ty.
I can tell you have put a lot of thought into this piece and love the way you used magick in the process. I hope that it remains in this category to be consistent with the opener. As stated by others, keep your focus on your product and your story, not on the critics. I was entertained by the opener and look forward to the continued tale.
English
The fuck did I just read?
da fuck?
Lady, call your psychiatrist, you've obviously gone completely batshit.
I guess...
Too much unexplained; will have to wait for the next chapter for some, hoped for, understanding before abandonment.
This is intriguing stuff! Keep going.
I can tell you are setting mood and tone here for subsequent chapters. You are laying the foundation for something truly erotic. Don't let the short sighted strokers here who want to pop their corks in thirty seconds and then go back to World Of Warcraft get you down... take your time with this just like you are doing and keep going! Every good series needs a solid bedrock to build upon and you are doing that here. Well done!
Relax.....
This is part of a series (thanks Bill)...it's based on SOME Coven practices back in the day (Gardner) ...all will be explained, please don't be negative bc you don't understand it, ok? Your choice to read or not, but no call to attack the writer. Ty.
Very nice opening
I can tell you have put a lot of thought into this piece and love the way you used magick in the process. I hope that it remains in this category to be consistent with the opener. As stated by others, keep your focus on your product and your story, not on the critics. I was entertained by the opener and look forward to the continued tale.
very good
this reminds me of the TV show "Charmed" except this is with a grandmother, mother and daughter and not 3 sisters, but still very good series
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