All Comments on 'Cat's Eye Ch. 01'

by WhiteMyst

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AnimeHimekoAnimeHimekoabout 20 years ago
Amazing!

That was wonderful! It was so hot; I absolutely love it! I really like Micheal's character, and Jasmyne is very likable. (However, you might want to reconsider her name. It's not totally improbable, but if she comes from a "small country town," she's not so likely to have such an exotic name. Of course, I really like the name Jasmyne, I'm just not sure that it fits.) But either way, please do continue it soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Excellent

Great piece, Can't wait to read more of it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Pure brilliance!!!

i have never been left so wet from a mere story. i eagerly await the next chapter in what is proving to be an absolutely fantastic story. KEEP WRITING!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hot!

when are you going to post the next chapter?

soon I hope..really liked this story. Can't wait for the next one!

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